unbroken is a story/ poem that is basically just a combination of how ive been feeling the last 7 or 8 months, broken. If youve been following my blog then you know about the issues with the ex girlfriend that have lead to feeling like that and unbroken is me getting past her.
For the longest time i couldnt find a way to write this, i wanted to do it directly but i figured using other people & metaphors would be easier for me to get it out. I was at the movies when I went to see iron man 2 with my mom and brother in may and you know how movies always play music while you wait for it to start. I heard Terrified by Katharine McPhee and Zachary Levi. and it hit me, and so i got home and watched the video for it which inspired my poem. Im not gonna explain the video so I suggest you go and watch it.
*when i say "and they could hear their heartbeat in their ears" its because ive had times when something will happen whether good or bad and I can hear my heart beat so loud i can hear it in my ears. so i used that as a way to show something significant is happening.
I tried to say w/o saying that they have both been hurt in their past and are still hurting but know its time to get back out and stop living in depression. and not let pain control them, as i have been doing. they are fearful, but hopeful that all will be well..and actually it will be for them, i wanted to hint that them wishing on the star to be unbroken was them staying together forever.
*which is part of why i chose to name her caelyn, i had looked it up last week and it means forever loved.
So I hope you guys like it and understand it a little more. I may have something else coming, im not sure exactly if im going to write my next idea. But ill keep you posted.
oh, im heading to boston tuesday. not exactly sure how long im staying, havent decided yet..
Peace,
Fall..
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